That’s her best friend of six years but—She’s
in love with him. This isn’t a new feeling for her-- She’s had it for
sometime. Even though she had a boyfriend knowing her feelings for her best
friend, she was terrified of ever telling Nathaniel because of possible
rejection so she put her feelings on the back burner in hopes that they would
go away. But of course they didn’t as most love stories go. She soon found out
that Nathaniel had felt the same way but he wasn’t ready for a long
relationship with her. He knew he was immature and that he didn’t know what he
wanted and he told her exactly that. Of course, she was upset but she respected
his honestly, after all, most boys at the age of 15/16 could never be so honest
and open about their feelings.
Nathaniel has stressed the fact that he
didn’t want to hurt his best friend and said that she has two places in his
life, either his best friend or his future wife. He had really thought about
her and wanted to make sure that she would stay in his life for as long as time
would allow. Even though this isn’t a fairytale ending, the girl still has hope
about herself and her best friend and vice versa. And yes they aren’t dating
but they have the best, honest, open, trustworthy and humorous relationship
that any teenager or person could ever ask for.
It’s been five years and the girl is
turning 21. Her and Nathaniel are still best friends but a lot has happened
since their first confession of each other’s feelings. Nathaniel is headed
toward the NFL as a right tackle playing offense for the Indiana Pacers and if
he succeeds their draft, he will make history as the youngest right tackle at
the age of 22. Also, the girl is well on her way to becoming the fashion
designer of her dreams will a little more hard work and more time she will also
own her own line. Furthermore, the two star crossed lovers have been hanging
out lately more than usual and Nathaniel has shown signs of maturity. He isn’t
talking to other girls and is hanging out with her like he used to and is
devoting all his time to his best friend. He bought her a promise a ring that
signifies that you will be together until engagement because he wanted to make
his best friend, his long-term girlfriend. He then asked her to meet her at
Central Park West 85th street on a Saturday around 5:30 p.m. on a
nice Fall day mid September— Then everything changed...
“ Hey beautiful, I missed you”, Nathaniel
said to the girl excited and nervous.
“ HI NATHAN”, said the girl with bright
eyes in a high-pitched excited voice. “I missed you so much too. This was such
a surprise for you to ask me to go to Central Park with you”.
“ I know laughs, but you already
know I’m full of surprises. Come follow me though, I have another surprise for
you”, said Nathaniel in a low hushed tone still nervous inside about the
upcoming even but trying very hard not to show it.
“ Alright, oh my Gosh, I’m so excited! I
really missed you baby boo”, the girl implied as she treaded by his side to
hold his hand.
Nathaniel took
his future girlfriend to her favorite secret place in Central Park that is
surrounded by full trees and a little withered black park bench on which they
sat upon. The wind was subtle, nut just enough to feel that it was present in
the atmosphere around them and as the perfect sunset was ahead with the leaves
rustling on the cement paved floor and the sounds of nature flooding the air
like the chirping of red robins and blue birds, Nathaniel went on to talk to
the girl.
“ So ma, there’s something I’d like to ask
you. You’ve been in my life for 11 years and you’ve always had my back and been
by my side. You are so beautiful inside and out”, Nathaniel proclaimed as he
reached in his jacket pocket for the Pandora promise ring. “ I don’t want to
spend another day without being able to call you mine, my girlfriend. With this
promise ring, i promise to be yours forever. Will you be my girlfriend”?
“ OH MY GOSH NATHAN”, the girl said
excited, shaky and in tears. “ YES, yes. Nathan I love you”.
The Newly
announced couple began kissing and hugging each other passionately and full of
excitement.
“ Happy birthday best friend, I hope this
is a day to remember”...

This story won me over a little, GOOD JOB! Your character development for Nathaniel was really good. He went from an immature and unsure boy to a serious and mature man.
ReplyDeleteYasssss gurllll the begging just pulled me in immediately. I love the enchanting influence of Maya Angelou. I also love how emotions are torn because they don't want to ruin their friendship but the girl can't help her feeling she's in love.
ReplyDeleteYour story is so adorable. The beginning is my favorite part because it's very insiteful and immediately grabs your attention. Your story is also very relatable, it's probably every "fashion girls" dream. I do wish you developed their characters as individuals though. In the end good job. :)
ReplyDeleteI liked how you transition smoothly time wise, everything was so cute, it made me go aww when Nathaniel proposed with a Pandora ring. Totally in the Nicolas Sparks category, hopefully one of us experiences that moment
ReplyDeleteYou used a tight plot structure and strong character development, especially of Nathan, to make it all come together as a sentimental, sweet story. Well done.
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